8th/30

I had an inverview with my writing tutor. There are two main problems with my writing.

One is the usage of word. It is necessary for me to pay more attention on collocation.
The other is the tense. This is a misunderstanding of writing style. I can correct this right away.

Next homework is about introduction. Hope my writing will be better and better.

Plus,

I bought Stephen King's latest novel with half price. Perfect!!! I can't wait to read his new book. (Say, this book is not a horrible story, but is discussing about human nature.)