16th /30

I got the second writing assignment back.

Although John said it is a good essay, i am not satisfied with the result.

There are two OLD problems with my writing.

1. Article. (D*** it!!! Why can't i get it right???)
2. Usage & collocation

The ways to improve it are READ AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE and WRITE AS MUCH AS I CAN.

I kind of like writing. These problems won't fall me down.
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By the way, the vocabulary John asked me today is

flamboyant = dazzling = colorful.

I wear a flamboyant hat today!!! That is the reason he asked me the word.